Hi Gideon. Thanks for submitting an article to FS. It seems you have a setting that doesn't allow me to send you private notes on the submission, so I have to use this more public method. Please try to change that for future needs.

For this submission (and any future ones) please add a feature image that doesn't infringe on any copyright. For example, you can use unsplash.com images. Then, add the image credit under the image (you can copy it from the Unsplash page where you download it).